There's this moment in nearly every ghostwriting project when the author's draft outline lands in my inbox. In just two minutes, I can tell if the book's got potential.
The ideas? Usually solid. The real question: Who's the book for? When I flip through those early pages and see a step-by-step of the author's career, "here's my success story, here's my revelation, here's my method", a problem pops up. Not a dealbreaker, but a genuine hurdle. If left unchecked, the book risks becoming just a polished LinkedIn profile rather than something readers will revisit.
The problem isn't voice. It's focus.
People often say the toughest part of ghostwriting is capturing the author’s voice. Sure, that's vital. Slip-ups there stand out. But it's not the main challenge. The real task is grasping what the book is truly about before a single word hits the page.
Here's the twist many business book authors miss.
Business books typically fall into two categories. Author-centric books center around the author's stories, qualifications, and insights. Reader-centric books address a problem the reader faces, using the author's experience to guide the solution. Writing an author-centric book feels rewarding. It validates the author's journey and is simpler to outline since it mirrors a career timeline. But they rarely resonate, not because the author lacks value, but because the reader can't relate to the narrative. They become mere spectators.
Take this tech founder for example, who had 22 years in enterprise software. Smart guy. His first outline? Eleven chapters, all about his company’s AI journey. Early readers acknowledged his intelligence. But one bluntly remarked, "I kept waiting for the part where this was about me." So we turned it around: what does a non-tech executive need to know about AI to avoid fear-driven, costly mistakes? That shift took three weeks and a tough phone call. His insights remained, but now they focused on the reader's world, not his résumé. Eight months after release, he got 14 speaking requests, with four turning into paid gigs.
It's simple. As Malcolm Gladwell says, lasting books "reflect the reader's world back at them." Not the author's. The author’s expertise is the lens; the reader’s reality is the focus.
Ironically, a reader-centric book does more for the author's credibility than an author-centric one. When readers finish a book and think, "This person understands me," it builds deeper trust. Impressed readers admire. Understood readers hire, refer, and attend your talks.
This doesn't mean erasing your voice or turning your book into a dull how-to guide with your name on it. That's another trap, equally harmful. A book that loses its author while trying to be helpful becomes forgettable. Aim for something specific: your true perspective, your experiences, your unique mindset, all targeted at solving a pressing reader problem.
Here's the tricky bit, and I want to be honest with you: most authors don't actually know their readers' real issues. They're familiar with their own story. They understand their achievements. But the exact words a potential reader uses when they're lying awake, worrying about the problem your book could solve? Discovering that takes work. Genuine conversations, not assumptions. And it means reshaping your material to address someone else's needs, not just narrating your own tale.
It's uncomfortable. But crucial for success.
Consider these points:
The two-paragraph test. Can a reader see themselves in the first two paragraphs of your chapter? If they must wait until page three to see why it matters, you've lost them. Not just a few. Most.
Voice ≠ orientation. You can write in your authentic voice and still be heading the wrong way. Voice is style. Orientation is strategy. Both matter. But strategy leads.
"What I learned" isn't "what you need." Most business books focus on what the author found interesting about their journey. Reader-centric books focus on what the reader needs to solve. Your story is evidence, not the main act.
The question that shifts everything: Before writing a word, ask yourself what your reader wants to achieve, avoid, or understand. Not "what do I want to say." What do they need to hear? Answer that truthfully and watch your outline evolve.
If you're playing with a book idea or staring at a draft that feels flat and can't figure out why, I'd really like to hear where you're stuck. Reply and tell me what your book is about. More importantly, who it's for. Sometimes just saying it out loud is what gets things moving.
And if you know someone struggling to kickstart their book, pass this along.
Best,
Mike
